Well this is actually the first time for me to write poems or what ever you would like to call them... i wanted to take your advice on how to improve and also if you like what i've already written so far?

--- They are NOT complete just pieces or beginnings of poems...

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the was
the is
and the wannabees

life is all about choices
choices that we make

that shape our destiny
that shape our personality
that shape our hearts
that shape who we are
that deiced who we become

love for the world
the people you meet
the earth you touch
the air you breath
the water that brings everything to life

be thankful
be happy
make the best out of it
cause you never know what's coming next

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when you are in sight
you touch my heart
it feels so right
it makes me smile

you are the light
that gave me life
and hope each day
without you
i am just a body
without a soul
lost in the darkness
without hope

time is priceless
only around you
you make it worth
the times we spend
not the times
we search to end

a smile to ease
a touch to life
a kiss of destiny

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sins are for sinners
but haven't we all

what makes us different
what makes them fall

limitations that blinds us
freedom that kills them

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i'm in pieces
from the last time he was with you
standing in the rain
holding you tight

looking into your starlight eyes
and remembering the days that passed
and the seeing the days that shine to come

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Please Leave Your Comments.... Tell me what you really think... improvements and methods of improving... on each on thanks